Posted by AngelSmrti666
Sat, 05/03/2008 - 2:56pm
english version
here's the english version of my poem by request the translation is a bit rough and it doesn't rime as much as the original
Come to me, die, be reborn!
I am the Angel of Death!
One and only,
with my black wings
i live in your pain
(come to me)
don't be afraid of death
my kiss
will take away your sufering
(die)
you wake up, you're in a tunel,
a light a the end, you know where this leads
take a step out of the darkness
(be reborn)
now you're mine
and it is not your will
to leave whenever you want
forever with me
not just tonight
my world is around you
I AM THE ANGEL OF DEATH!
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poem
I liked it alot i must say! I would do a poem to go with it but a little but of writers block at the moment. But hope you keep writing.
throw yourself to truly find yourself! Flowing among the conciousness of the masses we fight our way threw the fields of screaming lost souls that tare at our dreams of our life.
no longer
*scratches head* :P
that was one bad itch:P
that was one bad itch:P
fuckin
dandruff! *scratches head for real* :P
That's deep! My favorite
That's deep! My favorite line - "I live in your pain"
Thanks for translating it!
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That was some powerful.. I
That was some powerful.. I suppose it did lose some of it's effect in th translation because it dosn't ryhem, but I liked it! you're a great writer, can't wait so see more of your stuff :)
btw, what was the original language your wrote it in?